2 Stars · 2016 · Book Reviews · Fantasy · Paranormal · Steampunk · Young Adult

Revenge and the Wild │ Michelle Modesto

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Synopsis:

The two-bit town of Rogue City is a lawless place, full of dark magic and saloon brawls, monsters and six-shooters. But it’s perfect for seventeen-year-old Westie, the notorious adopted daughter of local inventor Nigel Butler.

Westie was only a child when she lost her arm and her family to cannibals on the wagon trail. Nine years later, Westie may seem fearsome with her foul-mouthed tough exterior and the powerful mechanical arm built for her by Nigel, but the memory of her past still haunts her. She’s determined to make the killers pay for their crimes—and there’s nothing to stop her except her own reckless ways.

But Westie’s search ceases when a wealthy family comes to town looking to invest in Nigel’s latest invention, a machine that can harvest magic from gold—which Rogue City desperately needs as the magic wards that surround the city start to fail. There’s only one problem: the investors look exactly like the family who murdered Westie’s kin. With the help of Nigel’s handsome but scarred young assistant, Alistair, Westie sets out to prove their guilt. But if she’s not careful, her desire for revenge could cost her the family she has now.

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Review:

I couldn’t get into this book. Everything was really predictable and I had a hard time staying interested.

The book just really rubbed me the wrong way right from the start. I was a little overwhelmed with the descriptions of Alistair.

“… looked at Westie with large eyes as blue as a broken heart…”
What??? How is a broken heart ever been a way to effectively describe a color, any color?

Then a few pages later we get “… two glowing blue moon’s…”

It was just awkward for me.

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